saw storks giving people babies and animals. They carried babies in bags in their beaks. The storks took babies and cat's to house's. some of the people lived in 4 story buildings. The storks put the babies on the windows.
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Friday, 22 September 2017
partley clouds
One sunny day we were in the clouds, The sun was bright. The sky was light blue. The clouds looked like cotton candy. I
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HI Bianca I like how you dicscribed the cloud's and the sun and the sky but next time you maybe want to put more words
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