I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Showing posts with label Spencer park. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Spencer park. Show all posts
Friday, 14 June 2019
digital teachnology
1. what do we think digital technology hurumanu will be about learning to use the internet
Monday, 3 April 2017
Spencer Park
W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
- The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
- Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
- A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
Beach Walk
Last week we went to spencer park. I went in the bus. When we were there we went in our groups. Group one went to the lagoon walk. We saw horses walking on the sand. I was excited to go with the class.
At the playground, I climbed on the big spiderweb. I could see the beach from up the top. I went on the swings with Pame and we talked and laughed. Then I fell off the swing, but luckily I didn’t break anything! We laughed again. Then Pame fell off the swing with her broken arm.
Next, we went to the beach and I collect shells and sticks. I had to dig under the sand to find shells. I could hear the ocean in some of the shells. I put my sticks and shells in a bag so that we could make things out of them back at school.
I went back to the playground and had a sandwich. Next I went on the lagoon walk. I saw black birds.
I travelled home with Pame on the bus and we talked about our great day. I learnt that horses like to walk on the beach.
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