Monday 25 September 2017
parlty cloud
One sunny day we were in the clouds, The sun was bright. The sky was light blue. The clouds looked like cotton candy. I saw storks giving people babies and animals. They carried babies in bags in their beaks. The storks took babies to house
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Hi beinca
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you described the clouds and sky. Did you think about adding a picture? Maybe next time you could add more parts of the story. By Hayley HB