W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
- The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
- Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
- A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
Beach Walk
Last week we went to spencer park. I went in the bus. When we were there we went in our groups. Group one went to the lagoon walk. We saw horses walking on the sand. I was excited to go with the class.
At the playground, I climbed on the big spiderweb. I could see the beach from up the top. I went on the swings with Pame and we talked and laughed. Then I fell off the swing, but luckily I didn’t break anything! We laughed again. Then Pame fell off the swing with her broken arm.
Next, we went to the beach and I collect shells and sticks. I had to dig under the sand to find shells. I could hear the ocean in some of the shells. I put my sticks and shells in a bag so that we could make things out of them back at school.
I went back to the playground and had a sandwich. Next I went on the lagoon walk. I saw black birds.
I travelled home with Pame on the bus and we talked about our great day. I learnt that horses like to walk on the beach.
